Sappy

September 25, 2010
The Day I died
You held me tight;
shielding me away from the night.
Your arms were around me,
even if they didn't have to be.
And I was happy,
even if it was a little bit sappy.

The Day I died
You looked into my eyes;
and swore they glistened like the night sky.
Then I blushed and looked away,
when you said you'd be with me each and every day.
But I knew you were right;
Because I could feel it to, our hearts bounded
together so tight.

For The Day I died

I found my love,


And rose to heaven, Up above.





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Mmarie said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 6:28 am
I like how you repeated "the day I died" it gave us a sence of both repitition and setting! write more!
 
nikkigonefishin said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 10:42 pm
omg this is absolutely beautiful i really like the stong emotion you transmit in a subtle way. i really like it
 
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