His Last Words

August 25, 2010
By babynoel1225 GOLD, Mendon, Michigan
babynoel1225 GOLD, Mendon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
-You dont know what you have 'till its gone.
-Sometimes giving up doesn't mean your weak sometimes it means your strong enough to let go.
- Remember Patrick, licking doorknobs is illegal on other planets- Spongebob Squarepants.


His last words were to me
I love you but were not meant to be.
A shattered Heart, a piece of paper
Nothing to stand for nothing to say for. The worst thing is she had no doubts. This boy was her's, But not now. One last kiss, three last words. Now he's gone in a mist so absurd. The hardest part is to take on life. Knowing that nobody's by her side. Nobody to bring her up, to take her down. No one to love her in this world so round. If you take theses words in your heart. You would know this girl was broken from the start. This boy she loved so much form her heart is slowly ripping it apart. What he knows is that it hurt. But he doesn't care cause he's a conceited jerk. A love for a boy that once burned so strong is now dead and long gone. Now she knows from the start she hates the boy who once had her heart.


The author's comments:
Just a quick poem i wrote.

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on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:14 am
babynoel1225 GOLD, Mendon, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
-You dont know what you have 'till its gone.
-Sometimes giving up doesn't mean your weak sometimes it means your strong enough to let go.
- Remember Patrick, licking doorknobs is illegal on other planets- Spongebob Squarepants.

Okay.. not a problem at all:D

on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:13 am
babynoel1225 GOLD, Mendon, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
-You dont know what you have 'till its gone.
-Sometimes giving up doesn't mean your weak sometimes it means your strong enough to let go.
- Remember Patrick, licking doorknobs is illegal on other planets- Spongebob Squarepants.

Thanks Much:D

on Sep. 30 2010 at 3:38 pm
CuteAsIce PLATINUM, Pretoria, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Today is always a good day because tomorrow is new day.

wow - not much i can say...just wow :)

on Sep. 29 2010 at 10:23 pm
theVillager SILVER, Mound City, South Dakota
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Ya no prob. I'm just starting off too and would like some feedback. You should check out my poems and criticize...good or bad :)

on Sep. 28 2010 at 9:33 am
babynoel1225 GOLD, Mendon, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
-You dont know what you have 'till its gone.
-Sometimes giving up doesn't mean your weak sometimes it means your strong enough to let go.
- Remember Patrick, licking doorknobs is illegal on other planets- Spongebob Squarepants.

Thank you Im just starting and i need all the praise i get:D I really appreciate it!

on Sep. 10 2010 at 10:57 pm
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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great -&& sullen poem, keep it up and keep writing more !

on Sep. 7 2010 at 11:10 pm
theVillager SILVER, Mound City, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Wow, this is super powerful poem. Even when the picture you paint is an extreme situation, it still stirs something I can feel inside me. Good work!


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