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Remember Me?

Are you thinking of me,
(When your kissing her lips?)

Do you think of my eyes,
(And your hands on my hips?)

Do you remember the way,
(That we used to be?)

And when your on top of her,
(Are you thinking of me?)

Do you miss the way,
(I made you feel within?)

And do you miss how it felt,
(When my breathe touched your skin?)

When you see my face,
(Is it hard to breathe?)

Well boy just remember,

You made me leave.




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CuteAsIce said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 3:54 pm:
Nice! You go girl! :)
 
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WickedPrincess said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:39 am:
I like it. Its really interesting.
 
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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 10:04 pm:
this reminds me of the song "Accidental babies" by Damien Rice... how he wonders what she does when with another man... nice rhytm/rhyme scheme... the only thing is to watch out for typing errors unless they were intended
 
theMysteryPoet replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 1:11 am :
That would depend entirely upon which part you are talking about. Lol.
 
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