Just Need To...

July 31, 2010
By smieyface212 SILVER, Beachwood, Ohio
smieyface212 SILVER, Beachwood, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I have many of these, but here's a main one:
"Animals our not ours to eat, wear or torture, they help us and our environment, and we need to take care of their environment and give them love in return"

I'm always based off of my desicions
And I seem to appear like an apparition
I've always been invisible
If I give that's the only way I appear visible
And I'm not exactly clear or sure
On why I've been so insecure
On showing what I've got inside
It's not like I've got anything to hide
I've always been on the shy side
And for me lifes been a bumpy ride
I really hope someone finds a cure
To help me understand and make sure
That I am going to be okay
And I am going to make my way
To a life that is lovely and luxurious
That leads me not to be so curious
And to stop being so hesitant
But loosen up and become confident
There are some things I'd just love to shout
But I won't instead I'll just spell them out
And what these words will have been said
Is "I wish this bashful side I could shed"
So I need to get these things I lack
So that I am able to become intact
Because I don't want to be an apparition
I want to be a full beautiful vision
:)) <3

The author's comments:
At the time, I was really bored, and I had so much on my mind, and I decided to just make something up right on the spot, and I just wrote it all off the top of my head in literally about 2 minutes, and I'm actually still pretty satisfied with this poem, I love how deep it is, and I personally think it's one of my best :)) I hope the thought is mutual!!!

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on Aug. 27 2010 at 9:10 pm
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe

I love the way you play with your vocabulary. This poem flows very nicely. Would you mind taking a look at some of my work and telling me what you think?

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