Wake Up

July 16, 2010
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Our self destructing worldly ways,
And unrealistic trusting daze,
As cigarette fire,
Makes funeral pyre,
Turn precious green to smoky haze.





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livelifeloud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 12:19 pm
whoa. this is really good! for me, it seems it's hard to write a good poem that also rhymes, but you did it! (:
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:40 am
Haha thanks!!! i have the opposite problem... i cant write a poem that doesnt rhyme :)
 
livelifeloud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 1:02 pm
haha. that's great! we need both here on teen ink (:
 
Calamine16 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 12:03 pm
short and sweet. I love it.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:39 am
Thanks!!!     
 
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