Wake Up

July 16, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


Our self destructing worldly ways,
And unrealistic trusting daze,
As cigarette fire,
Makes funeral pyre,
Turn precious green to smoky haze.



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on Aug. 28 2010 at 1:02 pm
rowyourboat GOLD, Lutz, Florida
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haha. that's great! we need both here on teen ink (:

on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:40 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Haha thanks!!! i have the opposite problem... i cant write a poem that doesnt rhyme :)

on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:39 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!     

on Aug. 20 2010 at 12:19 pm
rowyourboat GOLD, Lutz, Florida
15 articles 0 photos 14 comments
whoa. this is really good! for me, it seems it's hard to write a good poem that also rhymes, but you did it! (:

on Aug. 20 2010 at 12:03 pm
Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Ordinary people can do extraordinary things if given a chance" ~R. Limbaugh~
Heaven is like Hawaii. I haven't been there yet.

~Michelle~

short and sweet. I love it.




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