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The bright new king, a shooting star,
One day took out his shooting car,
With crash and bend,
Came timely end,
I see just how lucky they are!





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ELM522 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 9:22 pm
This is super-unique! It's just a one-of-a-kind! The lay-out is nice, as well!
 
LoveTravelTell said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:46 pm
This is interesting. I'm not sure I completely understand it, but that's why I enjoy it.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 4:24 pm
ahhahaha its just sposd to be a cute poem!! thanks!!
 
Clopsey said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 11:07 am
I really like this one. It's short and concise and too the point. You say just enough but not too much. Great! :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:30 am
Haha its just sposd to be cute!! THANKS!!!
 
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