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Man Who Roasts

There once was a man from the east coast,

Who had made quite a terrible host,

They said he was mean,

And awfully unclean,

And for that he will certainly roast




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Just.A.Dream said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 6:23 pm:
Hahaha, that is a very good first limerick. It had a great sense of humor and flowed well. :)
 
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spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 9:33 pm:
random but funny, keep it up
 
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living4God said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 7:48 pm:
haha it's great :)
 
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apocalyptigirl said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:19 pm:
It bothers me that there isn't a period on the end, after "roast". Please put one for those of us who are grammar ocd, haha. I would be curious to see this man in another setting---like a short or long story. You could even make a series of poems about his humorous and horrible hosting habits. ;)
 
AgnotTheOdd replied...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 8:17 pm :
haha thanks thats a great idea.
 
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Stormythrone said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 6:26 pm:
Haha I love this! Describes my brother well, I think ;)
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 7:22 pm:

Limericks are irresistible in their catchiness, and this was no exception. I applaud you for writing it.

However, I'm disappointed that you didn't work 'toast' into it.

 
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