The Choice

July 6, 2010
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She chose to be gay
in just one day
and I didn't know what to say.

But i let her have her way
and said okay
I'll be waiting by the bay.

Now here i lay
like a pile of hay
waiting for God's helpful ray.

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TheRealAriel1995 said...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 12:52 pm
thank you so so much :') I really appreciate constructive comments. And absolutely!
Collado92 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 11:12 pm

No it does it's simple and gets the point across,well one. =)


TheRealAriel1995 replied...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 1:02 pm
you're too sweet <3
Danica said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 1:21 am
I don't think this sucks at all; I really like it! It's very honest, and flows nicely :)   If you ever have the chance, please let me know what you think of my stuff!
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