The Choice

July 6, 2010
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"


She chose to be gay
in just one day
and I didn't know what to say.

But i let her have her way
and said okay
I'll be waiting by the bay.

Now here i lay
like a pile of hay
waiting for God's helpful ray.


The author's comments:
sadness... personal experience from a while ago. but this poem sucks it rambles on. ;)

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on Jan. 3 2013 at 1:02 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

you're too sweet <3

on Jan. 3 2013 at 12:52 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

thank you so so much :') I really appreciate constructive comments. And absolutely!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 11:12 pm
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 35 comments

No it does it's simple and gets the point across,well one. =)

 


Danica SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 1:21 am
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

I don't think this sucks at all; I really like it! It's very honest, and flows nicely :)   If you ever have the chance, please let me know what you think of my stuff!




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