It's still beating

May 17, 2010

The thudding in my chest,
can only grow so loud.
The racing speed of its rate,
wouldn't make my mother proud.

Slowly reaching forward,
with a hand that means no harm.
You look at me with dazzling eyes,
filled with wit and charm.

At first galnce, we're perfect.
Cause no one really knows,
that we're not really a fairytale,
and perfect's not how it goes.

Slowly you'll rip my heart out,
and I'll have front row seats.
I'll laugh cause you thought it'd kill me,
but still heart beats.



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on Aug. 17 2010 at 2:03 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I forgot what I was gonna say but i really like this captain. sorry.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 11:12 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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thank you soo much!!! :D 

I will try my best to keep using it (;

& I will mostly definitely will ! 


on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:16 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your´╗┐ funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

OMB LOVEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!

Saw ure post on  a poem titled Ribbon. u said u wanted sumone to comment and im the same way. i absolutely love this poem. itz beautiful its gutwrenching but so romantic. (those r both go od things) XD u hav such a gift! keep using it!

ps:if u ever hav a sec check my stuff out and comment plz!


on Jun. 10 2010 at 1:11 pm
maybeshannon DIAMOND, Keller, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"you just can't recreate stupid." --jacobbbb
"i just saw the picture of epicness... M&M guitar!!" --kevin brown
"our love is so dumbbb" --sean kingston
"if perfect's what you're searchin' for then just stay the same" --bruno mars <333 =]

haha well thanks youu =] glad im helping youu out =]

on Jun. 9 2010 at 3:27 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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thanks so much ! :) <3 and its people like you 0that make me keep writing :D

on Jun. 8 2010 at 10:17 pm
maybeshannon DIAMOND, Keller, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"you just can't recreate stupid." --jacobbbb
"i just saw the picture of epicness... M&M guitar!!" --kevin brown
"our love is so dumbbb" --sean kingston
"if perfect's what you're searchin' for then just stay the same" --bruno mars <333 =]

wow.  'nuff said.  this one is absolutely amazing.  the only good thing that comes out of a situation like that is awesome poetry like this. =] love itt


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