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No need to remind me

The shadows are coming,
creeping in from behind.
They'll consume me, i know.
As if i needed to remind.



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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 2:04 pm:
i really like this one. those 4 lines were just awesome.
 
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CassieSherman14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 6:43 pm:
Wow! great job!
 
insaneprincess replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 9:10 am :
Thanks ! :D
 
JesusIsMySavior777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 6:23 pm :
good job!!! love it, it has such emotion. the only thing i hav to critique is that u said " As if i needed to remind". i know the only way to rhyme was to keep it like that but just thought i wud point it out it shud be reminded. but as i said it was still good!!!! :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 11:18 am :

thank you soo much ; 

and yes i know, i just couldn't get it to rhyme :$ :P 

 
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