The shadows are coming,
creeping in from behind.
They'll consume me, i know.
As if i needed to remind.
creeping in from behind.
They'll consume me, i know.
As if i needed to remind.
Boosflash
i really like this one. those 4 lines were just awesome.
CassieSherman14Wow! great job!
JesusIsMySavior777good job!!! love it, it has such emotion. the only thing i hav to critique is that u said " As if i needed to remind". i know the only way to rhyme was to keep it like that but just thought i wud point it out it shud be reminded. but as i said it was still good!!!! :)
thank you soo much ;
and yes i know, i just couldn't get it to rhyme :$ :P
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