Look Before She's Gone

Look. Do you see her?
In the dark
In the shadows
Looking out
All alone
Look. Do you know her?
Her black hair
Her black lips
Her black clothes
Her scarred wrists
Listen. Do you heart her?
Hopeless cries
Soft whispers
Soundless screams
Voiceless words.
Listen. Do you heart her?
All the words
She doesn't say
Words her heart's
Stolen away
Speak. Talk to her.
You know you must
Yet you don't
Know it will help
Yet you won't
Speak. Comfort her.
Tell her what
She never hears
Calm her hate
Calm her fears
Reach. Save her
Before she runs
It's been too long
May be too late
Before she's gone
Reach. Protect her.
She's too scared
To come to you
You're to scared
She needs you
Look. Do you see her?
In the dark
Eternal night
Nevermore
To see the light
Look. Do you see her?
No. She's gone
Met her fate
Your chance has died
You were too late.





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Asianflowers said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 2:22 pm

This is Awesome! very insightful!! so true. Keep on writing!

By the way, could you look at my work? There are some new ones that I would really love your input on. Monster in me, Why can't we all get along?, Dear peers- jealous and challenged. Thanks

 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 8:24 pm

Allrighty, I'll look into them.

 

And thank you, that means a lot to me!

 
kenna2013 said...
May 21, 2010 at 9:13 pm
This is really good and i agree with Priskilla that it is a really deep powm :) Amazing Job
 
DreamWriter15 replied...
May 21, 2010 at 10:11 pm
Thanx :)  
 
Priskilla said...
May 21, 2010 at 10:38 am

This is a good poem.

The meaning of it was  really deep  

 I liked it .

 
DreamWriter15 replied...
May 21, 2010 at 4:47 pm
Thank you.
 
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