Look Before She's Gone

April 30, 2010
By DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.


Look. Do you see her?
In the dark
In the shadows
Looking out
All alone
Look. Do you know her?
Her black hair
Her black lips
Her black clothes
Her scarred wrists
Listen. Do you heart her?
Hopeless cries
Soft whispers
Soundless screams
Voiceless words.
Listen. Do you heart her?
All the words
She doesn't say
Words her heart's
Stolen away
Speak. Talk to her.
You know you must
Yet you don't
Know it will help
Yet you won't
Speak. Comfort her.
Tell her what
She never hears
Calm her hate
Calm her fears
Reach. Save her
Before she runs
It's been too long
May be too late
Before she's gone
Reach. Protect her.
She's too scared
To come to you
You're to scared
She needs you
Look. Do you see her?
In the dark
Eternal night
Nevermore
To see the light
Look. Do you see her?
No. She's gone
Met her fate
Your chance has died
You were too late.


The author's comments:
This is about people who see things every day that is obviously a tragedy waiting to happen, or a soul in need of Jesus, and just walk on by. If you can, please help them, because every time you pass them by, you have had a hand in their future.

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on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:24 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Allrighty, I'll look into them.

 

And thank you, that means a lot to me!


on Jun. 29 2010 at 2:22 pm
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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This is Awesome! very insightful!! so true. Keep on writing!

By the way, could you look at my work? There are some new ones that I would really love your input on. Monster in me, Why can't we all get along?, Dear peers- jealous and challenged. Thanks


on May. 21 2010 at 10:11 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Thanx :)  

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 9:13 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

This is really good and i agree with Priskilla that it is a really deep powm :) Amazing Job

on May. 21 2010 at 4:47 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Thank you.

on May. 21 2010 at 10:38 am
Priskilla PLATINUM, Ruskin, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"LIVE FAST DIE YOUNG"

This is a good poem.

The meaning of it was  really deep  

 I liked it .



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