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Anyone?

April 27, 2010
By CheerfullyBlue GOLD, Santa Clarita, California
CheerfullyBlue GOLD, Santa Clarita, California
14 articles 9 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forever is an awfully long time." -Peter and Wendy
"To die, would be an awfully big adventure." -Peter and Wendy


The lonely mist of forgotten rain
Is hanging in the air
Bitter cold and sullen black
Alone I’m standing there
Forgotten here and tossed aside
Does no one hear my cries
Lost I am, they put me here
And no one sees the lies
Surrounded by the emptiness
A hollowed person, all I see
Tormented by loneliness
Will anybody save me


The author's comments:
I made it for my book- which I will post later. But it fit my character Emma so well, I just loved it. So I'll let you try to figure out it's meaning.

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Z. said...
on May. 18 2010 at 8:31 pm
I love the depth of this! It totally shows emotion. Is your going through alot in her life. Maybe a divorce with her parents, a break up with a long term boyfriend? I really love this!

on May. 18 2010 at 6:12 pm
CheerfullyBlue GOLD, Santa Clarita, California
14 articles 9 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forever is an awfully long time." -Peter and Wendy
"To die, would be an awfully big adventure." -Peter and Wendy

Umm no need to be sarcastic thanks. if you dont like it dont comment, i would only like good things posted

haley said...
on May. 18 2010 at 10:26 am
depressing much?