April 27, 2010
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The lonely mist of forgotten rain
Is hanging in the air
Bitter cold and sullen black
Alone I’m standing there
Forgotten here and tossed aside
Does no one hear my cries
Lost I am, they put me here
And no one sees the lies
Surrounded by the emptiness
A hollowed person, all I see
Tormented by loneliness
Will anybody save me

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Z. said...
May 18, 2010 at 8:31 pm
I love the depth of this! It totally shows emotion. Is your going through alot in her life. Maybe a divorce with her parents, a break up with a long term boyfriend? I really love this!
DarkPoet said...
May 18, 2010 at 6:12 pm
Umm no need to be sarcastic thanks. if you dont like it dont comment, i would only like good things posted
haley said...
May 18, 2010 at 10:26 am
depressing much?
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