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Until I see you

Until I see you
Torn and bleeding,
Jagged and rough,
Sewn together with a thread,
So painful…
Feelings I dread,
Wrapped so tight that the bleeding will stop,
Sewn together till it hurts so much,
To the floor the needle does drop…
Patches here and there,
Don’t help much when I see you every where…
For now the pain will stop…
Until I see you.
Then my heart will drop,
Drop and tear to pieces…
But I will fix it,
Then it wont hurt, not even a little bit.
With a needle and thread I will fix it, wrap it,
Sew it,
And patch it…
It will be as good as new,
Until I see you.





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BeautifulSoul said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 10:42 am

I really loved this poem, that's why I five starred and commented it. I felt the emotion you portrayed and I can still feel it. It was as though that person who's heart was broken visited me. I absolutely loved it!!

read some of mine one day

 
SavvyLane replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 8:13 pm
Ok I will:) and thank you very much:D
 
Countrygirl4ever said...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 2:16 am
This is so good, amazing job, keep it up :)
 
SavvyLane replied...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 12:43 am
Thank u very much as well :)
 
tori_lynn said...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 12:18 am
thats so beautiful<3
 
SavvyLane replied...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 1:28 am
Thank you very much:)
 
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