1/2 of a Goodbye Hug

March 10, 2010
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There was a warm embrace,
One burning heart throbbing,
A quickening of breath's pace,
Accompanied by sobbing.

Her head was lain
Between his shoulder and neck.
His limp arms made it plain
That hope left not one speck.

A one-sided warm hug
Up to a wall of ice,
Causes him to shrug
Not once, but twice.

No return of affection
Makes her cling longer,
To make a connection
And force her heart stronger.

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kmarie17 said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 9:23 pm
I love this ! a.maz.ing!
REMi93 said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 11:12 pm
I love this! It's so emotional and has a lovely rhythm. Keep up the great work!
CountryGothic replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Thank you! :)
justbe-3 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 5:36 pm
That was really good. You're a nice writer, keep submitting work!
CountryGothic replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:07 am
Why thank you! I will.
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