1/2 of a Goodbye Hug

March 10, 2010
By CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle


There was a warm embrace,
One burning heart throbbing,
A quickening of breath's pace,
Accompanied by sobbing.

Her head was lain
Between his shoulder and neck.
His limp arms made it plain
That hope left not one speck.

A one-sided warm hug
Up to a wall of ice,
Causes him to shrug
Not once, but twice.

No return of affection
Makes her cling longer,
To make a connection
And force her heart stronger.


The author's comments:
I was feeling sort of sad because of a book I had read.

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on Oct. 2 2010 at 9:23 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

I love this ! a.maz.ing!

on Jun. 8 2010 at 6:38 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Thank you! :)

REMi93 GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 11:12 pm
REMi93 GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Love Never Fails

I love this! It's so emotional and has a lovely rhythm. Keep up the great work!

on Mar. 29 2010 at 11:07 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Why thank you! I will.

justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 5:36 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

That was really good. You're a nice writer, keep submitting work!


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