The Feeling of Hope

February 7, 2010
By DominicanMami BRONZE, Dedham, Massachusetts
DominicanMami BRONZE, Dedham, Massachusetts
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Thinking of my past that I want to get above,
Always hoping one day I’d fall in love.
Trying to get passed all my fears,
And trying not to show my tears.
Whenever things remain the same,
I feel like my actions are all a shame.
Hoping and wishing that you’d never leave me,
For somewhere in my heart I feel it’s meant to be.
Now its time to open my heart to you,
And slowly explain the things you don’t know are true.

The author's comments:
I was inspired by my boyfriend to write this poem. The night before I wrote this poem we had got into an arguement. That night that we were talking on the phone I just couldn't stop crying. He felt bad about the whole thing and howit started so ht began to appologize and started to tell me how much he loves me and never wants to break up or hear me cry like that again. I already love him deeply but hearing him say that to me made us connect more. So then when I was at school I just kept thinking about him and what he said to me on the phone so I started to write down all my feelings on paper and came up with this poem. The poem was written for him and because him.

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on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:24 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

i loved it. very heartfelt. i can totally relate. check out a few of mine and lemme kno watcha think. love it!! much appriciated.


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