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When the truth came out
and the silence grew
when the sky turned gray
and the wind just blew

i sat there in the corner
while you were in the crowd
my heart was in crumbles
and you acted very proud

my world was dark
while yours was light
but i was the one hurt
and it doesnt seem right

you left my lonely
with no hand to hold
for the tears drip down
wet and cold

but cold is the word for you
and nothing more
my world was in pieces
and with us you shut the door





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dreamer_believer said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 9:34 pm
amazing. honest, pure, a little sad, but very VERY good :) bravo! check out some of my work if you could, i love the feedback. keep writing :) i like your style!
 
Emokittiy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 3:23 pm
very beuatiful! i love your writing!! check out mine sometime. appreciated much!
 
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