Unloving Love

January 23, 2010
We loved today, that’s all I can say
I come tomorrow, you don’t say hey
I look in your eyes
Then I see all those lies
You’re making me cry

I walk away
Hearing your buddies say “Yeah!”
What I felt inside
Made me want to hide.

Now I walk by the park
I meet a guy named Mark
It starts again
Why would I say amen?

“Do you love me?”
Says he
I say, “ Yes.”
Did I really confess?

Again I’m alone
Outside in the cold
Do you really love me?
We’ll just have to see





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justbe-3 said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 8:06 pm
my favorite part is "did i really confess?" this poem is sort of very simple but has so much to it, i really liked it. keep writing!
 
contrygurl replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 7:18 pm
i totally agree with you
 
M.S.S. said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 12:24 pm
i'm kinda foggy on this but i'm interested to clear that fog...
 
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