January 20, 2010

The sky is all stormy and gray,

The overcast darkens our day,

The sun is not out,

As the clouds are all about,

So what more is there to say?

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--LoveHappens-- said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 6:16 pm
short sweet. but to make it more intense I would love it if you would explain the clouds
Jynxx replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 8:25 pm
right! thanks for the advice!
Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 6:10 pm
Take out the "all about" and just have 'about". This is really good. Limericks are hard to write! I like it!
...PensiveGurl... replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 3:53 pm
thanks for the advice! ^^
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