I Hate 33 Degrees (A Poem)

December 24, 2009
By The_Number_Five GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
The_Number_Five GOLD, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
-- Dr. Seuss

It's 33 degrees outside
We are all feeling blue
It would have been snowing
If it was 32

We would be building snowmen
Having snowball fights galore
But all we have is rain
Temperature, drop one more!

Dear Weather Man,
I don't mean to complain
But can we have snow, sir?
Instead of boring rain?

Mother Nature
Must really be befuddled
Because instead of snowdrifts
We have wet, splashy, puddles

In our school
The students sigh
Why can't it snow?
I'm gonna cry!

Is the magic number
Will it ever snow?
Gee...I wonder

The author's comments:
I hate it when it is 33 degrees and doesnt snow, it is so dissapointing. I decided to write a poem on the subject!

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This article has 5 comments.

Jiji Ridd said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:25 am
Jiji Ridd, Nashville, Tennessee
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My favorite poem on teen ink!

on Feb. 5 2010 at 10:39 am
Dragondust BRONZE, Manassas, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Life is tough. It's a lot tougher when you're stupid.

I love your poems, #5. They are always happy and uplifting! Congrats on your awesome poems!

jonahsark25 said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 12:27 pm
Love, love, love it!!!!! Awesome poem!

yoshiluver45 said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:17 pm
I hate it when it is 33 degrees! I want snow! This is a great poem.

mesoccer51 said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 4:34 pm
i think that your poem is very good and that is sayimg we should have more snow.More snow would be nice. it should drop 32 degrees.


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