If It Would Make You Happy...

November 9, 2009
If it would make you happy,
I'd fingerpaint the skies,
With every single reason,
Why I'll love you all my life.

And if I were a princess,
I'd abdicate my throne,
If it would make you happy,
And, with you, I'd build our home.

And if you needed silence,
I'd sit and hold your hand,
If it would make you happy,
I'd never ask, just understand.

And if I were the reason,
You always had to cry,
If it would make you happy...
I'd even say goodbye.

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CameandgonesmartyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 6:27 pm
so cute and so true
lemondrop16 said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 5:00 am
this is probably my favorite poem so far. nice job. (:
x_Topscore_x said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 3:59 pm
Amazing job! Gives me goose-bumps every time I read it :D
Never_Say_Never said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 6:50 pm
Amazing and true. You have a talent, keep writing!
Priya21 said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 11:21 pm
A beautiful truth.
BiancaMarie said...
May 18, 2010 at 12:37 pm

OMG! thatss ahmazing!

coment and rate mine?! (=

Victoriaaa14 said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 9:39 am
it was greatt :)
justbe-3 said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 3:51 pm
i absolutely love it! fantastic job!
lilcrazyshygirl said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 9:42 pm
i loved the last verse! i liked all of itt tho :)
ray1169 said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 8:09 am
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! i love the flow of it. dont stop writing. check out some of my work too comment tell me what you think it will mean everything to me. but i love your work keep writing
dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 11:50 pm
omigoodness! wow, this is an amazing poem. the flow is perfect, and the last stanza ties the entire poem together :) i just LOVE this piece....LOVE IT!! whoa, 5 stars :) check out some of my work and comment, your opinion would mean a lot!
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