November 7, 2009
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When the sun,
Bows for the day,
The curious stars,
Come out to play.
They twirl and twinkle,
And shine all night,
Until the sun rises,
And they leave our sight!

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PrincessSparkleStar said...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 8:45 am
I love this poem! In fact, I love all of your poems!!! Please would you check out and rate my poem too?
DanielM said...
May 13, 2012 at 11:17 am
I really liked this poem it was awesome.....Great Job!!! and keep it up.
LoveEternally said...
May 13, 2012 at 11:00 am
I love this poem :D good job!! keep it up. i can't wait to read more of ur stuff :D
timeformetofly7 said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 9:40 am
awww that was a cute poem ^^ i love it!!!
Someone_Who_Is_Loved said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 7:31 pm
OMG, when I read the title, I almost freaked.... I have a poe titled "Stars" 2.... U totally have 2 check it out :).....(It's a good, cute poem by the way)
princess4ever said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 2:46 pm
ur really talented! can u check out my poem&poems and comment? that would mean the world to me!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:23 am
Aw thanx n ya i'll def read ur stuff!
annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:17 am
Aw, this is so cute and your word choice was great. You're a great poet :)
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:13 pm
Aww thank u soooo much:)
CountryGothic said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:34 am
This is very good and I have rated it well; Do more writing-you should and I am sure it will be swell.
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:57 pm
Oh thank u so much 
bmmsbw said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 7:59 am
This was nice poem . I really enjoyed reading it .
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:11 pm
thnx i'm glad u enjoyed it:))
Sync. said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 10:14 pm
i like it its very fun:)
do you mind tking a look at some of my work and giving yur honest oppinoin? thatd be great if you did :)
keep writing your very talented :)
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:19 pm
Oh thank u vry much:)
Ya I'll def check out some of ur stuff:)
noelle said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 8:27 pm
I liked it i love looing at the stars. I wrote a poem about the stars but its still pending aproval. Keep up your creative ability.
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 11:49 am
I'll have to read it once it's on the website:)
Stars are just so magical and mysterious...I love em;)
SilverDawn said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 3:14 am
Wow, that sounds so pretty. It's playful and cute. I love it (:
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:55 pm
Thanx i love writing cute lil poems im glad u liked it
dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 11:50 pm
beautiful. pure, simple, sweet and true. absolutely breathtaking :)
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