Stars

November 7, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


When the sun,
Bows for the day,
The curious stars,
Come out to play.
They twirl and twinkle,
And shine all night,
Until the sun rises,
And they leave our sight!


The author's comments:
cuddling with my man and watching the stars and this came to me:)

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on Nov. 4 2012 at 8:45 am
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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I love this poem! In fact, I love all of your poems!!! Please would you check out and rate my poem too? TeenInk.com/poetry/ballad/article/499252/Take-a-Chance/

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 13 2012 at 11:17 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I really liked this poem it was awesome.....Great Job!!! and keep it up.

on May. 13 2012 at 11:00 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
I love this poem :D good job!! keep it up. i can't wait to read more of ur stuff :D

on Feb. 5 2011 at 9:40 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awww that was a cute poem ^^ i love it!!!

on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:31 pm
Someone_Who_Is_Loved GOLD, Mount Forest, Other
10 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
This quote is one I made up.....
"You can't climb a mountian without a harness." It means that you can't go where you want to get in life without the help of your friends or family.

OMG, when I read the title, I almost freaked.... I have a poe titled "Stars" 2.... U totally have 2 check it out :).....(It's a good, cute poem by the way)

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:23 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Aw thanx n ya i'll def read ur stuff!

on Jun. 19 2010 at 2:46 pm
princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
1 article 23 photos 74 comments
ur really talented! can u check out my poem&poems and comment? that would mean the world to me!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:13 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Aww thank u soooo much:)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:17 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

Aw, this is so cute and your word choice was great. You're a great poet :)

on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:57 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh thank u so much 

on Mar. 29 2010 at 11:34 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

This is very good and I have rated it well; Do more writing-you should and I am sure it will be swell.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:11 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thnx i'm glad u enjoyed it:))

bmmsbw said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:59 am
This was nice poem . I really enjoyed reading it .

on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:19 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh thank u vry much:)

Ya I'll def check out some of ur stuff:)

Sync. GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 10:14 pm
Sync. GOLD, Diamond Back, California
17 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new. " -Albert Einstein

i like it its very fun:)

do you mind tking a look at some of my work and giving yur honest oppinoin? thatd be great if you did :)

keep writing your very talented :)

on Dec. 26 2009 at 11:49 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I'll have to read it once it's on the website:)

Stars are just so magical and mysterious...I love em;)

on Dec. 22 2009 at 8:27 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

I liked it i love looing at the stars. I wrote a poem about the stars but its still pending aproval. Keep up your creative ability.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:55 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx i love writing cute lil poems im glad u liked it

on Dec. 11 2009 at 3:14 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
Wow, that sounds so pretty. It's playful and cute. I love it (:

on Dec. 4 2009 at 12:56 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much:)


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