A Taste of Regret

November 4, 2009
By MichaelTedder SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
MichaelTedder SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
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I’m sitting alone, in agony tonight. I’m crippled in thought, its so hard to write.

I have a problem, I speak my mind.
My ego betrays me, my love I cant find.

My words have killed her, they’ve taken her heart. My prides the reason, we’re now forced apart.

I’m just so trapped in my head, so trapped in my thought. I know im the reason, for every time that we fought.

I feel so stupid, for the things that I say. Knowing she’s tired, this time she wont stay.

Its all my fault, I killed what we had. I am the reason, that im always so sad.

So ill say that im sorry, one last time. You don’t have to forgive me, I understand my crime.

I know that I’ve hurt you, again and again. The end was emanate, the question was when.

The answer’s here, the day has come. But the result of everything’s left me so numb.

But I’m sorry still, and I’m not ok. We all make mistakes, what else can I say?

I just love you, and I miss you, and I want you to stay. But even if you don’t , on my heart you will lay.

I do LOVE YOU
and I will FOREVER
and I never want to lose you.
I’m so sorry.
And even if you wont forgive me
at least you know that your still
And
always will be my world.



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on Apr. 16 2010 at 4:51 pm
MichaelTedder SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
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thanks everyone :) i rly wana get some of these published so RATE them please!! :) i have all of these poems and not one has been published yet :/... help me out :)

on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:04 pm
AuntRiah BRONZE, Warrior, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no great genius without a mixture of madness."-Aristotle

This is really sweet, but sad.

samantha13 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:09 pm
samantha13, Saugus, Massachusetts
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this is a really good poem and i love the meaning :)

on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:03 pm
marisaXangela BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
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awesome poemmmmmmmmm!

Eric DeMeo said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:13 am
Eric DeMeo, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Great Poem. It was awsome!!!

Marisa Titus said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:12 am
Marisa Titus, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This was a very touching poem and it means so much to me <3 

Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:01 am
Victoriaaa14, Saugus, Massachusetts
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It was soo meaningful and it was very good rhyming and powerful and sweet. i love this poem. it has a lot of meaning to me. :)

on Apr. 12 2010 at 1:36 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

This is so sweet! It brilliant and awesome! I really hope you continue to write forever!!

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 3:05 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I love this so much! It is definitely one of my favorites that ive read on here and you have amazing skills!

Aurora said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 7:46 am
ok dude, you are awesome! you have a brilliant mind and your poem is just wicked! this is my favorite poem i've ever read, no lie. and its so great, i don't have any tips for you. GOOD JOB DUDE! :)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 6:14 am
MichaelTedder SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
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hey these frist three are the first of many to come. i have a passion for writing so any positive comments or tips are really appreciateded... ps. RATE THEM!! haha.. :)


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