A Life Over To Soon

October 11, 2009
So sweet so bubbly
So pure was she,
But got bored
And wanted to die at sea

She that wanted less of life
And eager to be away from strife
Left behind a home and light
A mother, a friend, a daughter, a wife

So she stole a boat
On which she hoped it wouldn’t float
And made sure she left
Her jacket and coat

But when she got to sea
She looked directly at me
Thinking of all the places she’d rather be
And I knew she wanted to flee

Then I saw her shake head in worry & dread
And I saw her lips move as she slowly said
She wished she’d stay in bed
Then she fell overboard and I knew she was dead.

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LittleBug7293 said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 7:33 pm
this was an amazing poem i had felt the imagary was powerful it had give me chills i hope you write more i cant wait to read them
hiii said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:10 pm
i like the authors use of imagary in this poem.
Mz.Minny2011 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 8:10 pm
wow! very creepy but totally awesome LOVE IT <3
justbe-3 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 5:39 pm
Good job, it really is a touching poem.
Holly M. said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 12:29 pm
That is so sad..... But i loved it at the same time :)
Did she regret what she did? I love how it rhymes =)
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