I Love the Way. . .

I love the way you look a me
you long to make me smile.
It's apart of your trickery
to keep my heart for awhile.

I love the way you treat this girl
you renew her spirit from within.
You make her love you more and more,
but she battles the conquering of sin.

I love the way you are spiritually stable
because it brings me closer to God.
You might not know, but it makes me able
to express my spiritual feelings aloud.

Gosh, I love the way you respect this girl
you never fail to show your appreciation.
You always make her feel well-deserved
and you love to reach her expectations.

I'm so happy you finally made me that girl,
that I consistently dreamed to be
each time I get stronger when I
think about the future of you and me.





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Brittany G. said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 2:31 pm
I really like dat it gave me the gooses>>>:~)
 
BeautifulSoul replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 10:30 am
thanx for your comment!!
 
colchester said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 9:50 am
Love itt! comment on some of minee??? (:
 
BeautifulSoul replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 10:32 am
thanx, I tried to comment yours but i cant find any of your work. dont worry i'll keep looking though!
 
colchester replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 7:35 pm
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DallysGrrl said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 9:32 pm
Great job!!!! i think that u did so awesome on this limerick. Its really great. Good job. Its very strong and relateable. So good. Awesome. Amazing. Mayb comment on some of my work??
 
chu-chi,!!! replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 10:19 am
thanx nd yes, I'll be sure comment your work!
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 11:53 am
Ur welcome n thnx.
 
shortyy101 said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 12:19 pm
i like it...its really good...
 
chu-chi,!!! replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 2:23 pm
thank you !!!
 
Inkspired said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 3:34 pm
This is really great, I love the way you expressed it! You could maybe use stronger words in some places, but the casual language can also emphasize it. Love it!
 
chu-chi,!!! replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 10:48 am
Hahaha thanx
 
cassandra_2011 said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 8:56 pm
It may help if you did a little more work on the rhyme, but the poem is great no matter what. That was just a thought.
 
cassandra_2011 said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 8:55 pm
I really like this. It's not a love poem, but not quite a tragedy. You show devotion and much meaning within the poem. Great job!
 
Caroline35 said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 3:30 pm
It reminds me of a film I saw which was "Ten things I hate about you". I really like your poem ! Your ending isn't really expected and the feelings you express are true.
 
Dacorsha S. replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 11:42 am
thanx for ur comment
 
LostinthisWorld.67 said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 2:57 pm
I really like this and the rhyme makes it really good to.
 
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