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I Love the Way. . .

I love the way you look a me
you long to make me smile.
It's apart of your trickery
to keep my heart for awhile.

I love the way you treat this girl
you renew her spirit from within.
You make her love you more and more,
but she battles the conquering of sin.

I love the way you are spiritually stable
because it brings me closer to God.
You might not know, but it makes me able
to express my spiritual feelings aloud.

Gosh, I love the way you respect this girl
you never fail to show your appreciation.
You always make her feel well-deserved
and you love to reach her expectations.

I'm so happy you finally made me that girl,
that I consistently dreamed to be
each time I get stronger when I
think about the future of you and me.




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Ktaylorxo said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 3:48 pm:
This is so pretty!
 
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daponie said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 9:53 am:
This is soo nice!!!
 
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Lauren826 said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:08 pm:
This is really good!
 
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BeautifulSoul said...
May 20, 2011 at 11:20 pm:
thank you so much!
 
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BabyGirl<3SoldierBoy said...
May 20, 2011 at 9:32 am:
AMAZING IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!!!
 
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swagmasterflex said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:24 pm:
great rhyme scheme
 
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Mz.Minny2011 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 8:03 pm:
awwww... this was so sweet n im shure that if u wrote it about sum1 they luved it
 
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luvsoccer3000 said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 1:53 pm:
this is so adorable! i really love it. it really speaks to me
 
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Nicole1210 said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 3:12 pm:
That's so sweet!!! It sounds like it should be a song!! Great work.
 
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phlogiston This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 10:24 pm:
Wow that was really very sweet. I really liked it!
 
BeautifulSoul replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 7:56 pm :
thanks for the comments guys !
 
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kemmie said...
Nov. 3, 2010 at 12:30 pm:
nice job!!!!!!!!
 
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Countrygirl4ever said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 7:58 pm:
This is an AMAZING poem, love it so much. nice work :)
 
BeautifulSoul replied...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 11:21 am :
Thanks !! I'll try to put more work up so, keep checking me out and I'll return the favor !!
 
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ellie75 said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 7:52 pm:
i love this poem. amazing job(: my favorite by far.
 
BeautifulSoul replied...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 11:20 am :
Thank you so much!I appreciate your comment and I'm glad it's your fav. by far ;-) !!
 
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Courtnay said...
May 11, 2010 at 7:12 pm:

I LUV IT!!!!.....i belive most people can relate to this.....i agree 5 $t@r$!!  ....comment  on some of mine whenever you get a chance??....

 

 
Heartless911 replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 10:12 am :
isnt it so romatic? this poem is great!!!!
 
BeautifulSoul replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 11:32 am :
thank you so much!
 
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SavvyLane said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 8:15 pm:
It is very good :) I like it five stars
 
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