I Love the Way. . .

September 28, 2009
By BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments

I love the way you look a me
you long to make me smile.
It's apart of your trickery
to keep my heart for awhile.

I love the way you treat this girl
you renew her spirit from within.
You make her love you more and more,
but she battles the conquering of sin.

I love the way you are spiritually stable
because it brings me closer to God.
You might not know, but it makes me able
to express my spiritual feelings aloud.

Gosh, I love the way you respect this girl
you never fail to show your appreciation.
You always make her feel well-deserved
and you love to reach her expectations.

I'm so happy you finally made me that girl,
that I consistently dreamed to be
each time I get stronger when I
think about the future of you and me.



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Ktaylorxo GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 3:48 pm
Ktaylorxo GOLD, Little Egg Harbor, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody in this world will hurt you. You just gotta stick with the ones worth suffering for.

This is so pretty!

daponie SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 9:53 am
daponie SILVER, Lagos, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

This is soo nice!!!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:08 pm
Lauren826 SILVER, Old River, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true." - Christina Perri.

"Nothing lasts forever for all good things its true id rather trade it all by somehow saving you." - Avenged Sevenfold.

This is really good!

on May. 20 2011 at 11:20 pm
thank you so much!

on May. 20 2011 at 9:32 am
AMAZING IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!!!

on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:24 pm
great rhyme scheme

on Mar. 15 2011 at 8:03 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3

awwww... this was so sweet n im shure that if u wrote it about sum1 they luved it

on Feb. 21 2011 at 1:53 pm
luvsoccer3000 SILVER, Abington, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You can turn off the sun, but I'm still gonna shine.” jason mraz

this is so adorable! i really love it. it really speaks to me

Lilium BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 3:12 pm
Lilium BRONZE, Marysville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
If you don't try, you'll never know.

There is hope, you just have to search your heart for it.

That's so sweet!!! It sounds like it should be a song!! Great work.

on Nov. 27 2010 at 7:56 pm
thanks for the comments guys !

on Nov. 25 2010 at 10:24 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

Wow that was really very sweet. I really liked it!

kemmie SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 12:30 pm
kemmie SILVER, Lagos, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I'm going to be famous!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice job!!!!!!!!

on Oct. 14 2010 at 11:21 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Thanks !! I'll try to put more work up so, keep checking me out and I'll return the favor !!

on Oct. 14 2010 at 11:20 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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Thank you so much!I appreciate your comment and I'm glad it's your fav. by far ;-) !!

on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:58 pm
Countrygirl4ever BRONZE, Bloomer, Wisconsin
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This is an AMAZING poem, love it so much. nice work :)

ellie75 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:52 pm
ellie75 BRONZE, Nunica, Michigan
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i love this poem. amazing job(: my favorite by far.

on Sep. 27 2010 at 11:32 am
thank you so much!

on Sep. 20 2010 at 10:12 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

isnt it so romatic? this poem is great!!!!

on May. 11 2010 at 7:12 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
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I LUV IT!!!!.....i belive most people can relate to this.....i agree 5 $t@r$!!  ....comment  on some of mine whenever you get a chance??....

 


on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:15 pm
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

It is very good :) I like it five stars




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