When I Met You

September 24, 2009
By amandavanzant BRONZE, Yorktown, Virginia
amandavanzant BRONZE, Yorktown, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
my boyfriend is Christopher Vitt and i love him with all of my heart


When I met you, I wasn't planning on falling in love. I wasn't planning on feeling so attracted to someone, but you awakened the feelings inside of me that I'd fogotten existed. When I met you, I didn't relize how much our love would grow-that the attraction that first brought us together would reach beyond passion to the confort of knowing I have someone very special,someone who is not only my lover, but also my closest friend. When I met you, I had no idea where our relationship would lead us, how beautiful you would make my world. But now I know without a doubt... The luckiest day oh my life was the day that I met you!!!!


The author's comments:
This poem is about a day in my life that ment the world to me but he is no longer in my life hes now just a guy that I bypass in the hallways!!!!

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Gee-Gee SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 1:26 pm
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
if you dont like me get over it

hey ur work is great. :). can u check out some of mine and give me ur feed back?

Joele12 said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 7:35 pm

just a guy that you pass in the hallway.

kinda sucks.... but hey cherish that memory always then.


on Oct. 13 2010 at 7:04 pm
decayingorganicmatter SILVER, Wellington, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"We are not special. We are not crap or trash, either. We just are. We just are, and what happens just happens." --Fight Club

Amazing and very relatable

Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:37 am
Victoriaaa14, Saugus, Massachusetts
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it was good because i can deff relate to thiss. Meeting somoene and never thinking i would like them. (:

on Oct. 21 2009 at 8:59 pm
cassandra_2011 PLATINUM, North Pole, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Give in to love, or live in fear."

This is a great poem! It could use some work, but it has potential. Try spacing lines, after almost every comma or period should work. Being all bundled together distracts from the work. Great Job!


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