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September 23, 2009
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There once was a mouse named Louise
who craved for the taste of cheese.
He said, “It looks good,
and I know that I could,
but that trap would give me a squeeze.”

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IfLifeGivesYouLemons This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 24, 2012 at 7:55 pm
This is great. I love that it's actually a limerick. There are so many poems in this category that are more like ballads than anything, it's wonderful to finally see a properly written limerick. 
Dlord910 said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 8:14 am
Funny. I like the use and good and could
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 1:53 pm
cute! :) i like how you wrote the poem from what the mouse was thinking. cute poem, and very creative :) great job ;) check out some of my newest work if you could, i love the feedback.
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