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Dreams

I'm alive when it is dark,
So the party will start,
Through the shadows of the night,
The crow took its final flight,
And the dog will soon bark.



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puppies and rainbows said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:29 pm

This poem is like

Like a dream coming true

You speak to me man

 
ADD106 said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 9:23 am
I like the rhyme in this poem. I think it got the point across quite easily. However, it was short, almost too short. I feel extending this poem would be a great idea. It would make better than it already is.
 
PeepLoveR replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 9:44 am
i think it is good the way it is but thats my opinion ha
 
PayPay said...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 6:10 pm
wow this is cool i like it! O by tha way i would love for you to read some of mine.
 
PeepLoveR replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 9:45 am
ha i agree with you and you shoudl read some of mine too!!!
 
marlins1229 said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:09 pm
I loved your limerick! The only problem is that start doesn't ryhme with bark and dark. Otherwise keep up the great work!
 
group 7 said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 9:33 am
I thought that this poemwas very inspiring but very vague and to the point. you did a good job but i feel that you could have added more and been more detailed. otherwise good job
 
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