Dreams

This poem is like

Like a dream coming true

You speak to me man

I like the rhyme in this poem. I think it got the point across quite easily. However, it was short, almost too short. I feel extending this poem would be a great idea. It would make better than it already is.

wow this is cool i like it! O by tha way i would love for you to read some of mine.

I loved your limerick! The only problem is that start doesn't ryhme with bark and dark. Otherwise keep up the great work!

I thought that this poemwas very inspiring but very vague and to the point. you did a good job but i feel that you could have added more and been more detailed. otherwise good job