always, i will

September 13, 2009
Now that he's gone
it seems so long
since last we were entwined,
in mind and soul,
"I love you," I'm told.
"I'll be back so please don't cry."
Shaking I sit,
'though I won't admit,
that the pain is welling inside.
So short a time we had together,
I thought for sure it'd last forever.
But then they took you away from me,
and now I know they won't let us be.
I know I'm young but he's not so old,
and so I rebel at what I'm told.
That he is bad, and they think I'm good,
I wish they'd listen; I wish they could.
Maybe they'd consider what I conceal,
maybe understand how it is I feel.
So often aloof, suddenly so real.
I miss you babe, so for you, I wait,
to make my world surreal.

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DreamersJourney said...
Jan. 22, 2015 at 2:56 pm
pretty good
sarah98 said...
Apr. 26, 2013 at 4:47 pm
This was great. Just hold out, he will be back. Good look :)
GothChik95 said...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 8:49 pm
This poem almost made me cry when I read it. Way to go! I loved it!
Shahed said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 4:34 pm

I had to read the 1st part, so I read the 2nd it makes sense.. I hope you dont feel bad, I like your poems, which is what this is about, Such a great writer..

Check my poems.

shes_a_tee_ex_babeh_899 said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 8:44 pm
awwwwwwwwww.. and goood poem:]
the dog said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 2:33 pm
i love you baby
heaven said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 12:52 pm
this is cute..
well hell be out of jail in no time hunn.
just keep writing and keep him in your prayers.
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