always, i will

September 13, 2009
By shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I will never let schooling interfere with my education." (-forgot who it's by though)
also "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace."-Jimi Hendrix


Now that he's gone
it seems so long
since last we were entwined,
in mind and soul,
"I love you," I'm told.
"I'll be back so please don't cry."
Shaking I sit,
'though I won't admit,
that the pain is welling inside.
So short a time we had together,
I thought for sure it'd last forever.
But then they took you away from me,
and now I know they won't let us be.
I know I'm young but he's not so old,
and so I rebel at what I'm told.
That he is bad, and they think I'm good,
I wish they'd listen; I wish they could.
Maybe they'd consider what I conceal,
maybe understand how it is I feel.
So often aloof, suddenly so real.
I miss you babe, so for you, I wait,
to make my world surreal.


The author's comments:
my boyfriend's in jail for something he didn't do...i miss him

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on Jan. 22 2015 at 2:56 pm
DreamersJourney SILVER, Old Massett, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The best thing you can do is the right thing, the next best thing you can do is the wrong thing. The worst thing you can do is nothing."
"Decide to have an attitude of gratitude, you can become bitter or better."
"beYOUtiful, everyone else is taken."

pretty good

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 4:47 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

This was great. Just hold out, he will be back. Good look :)

on Nov. 8 2010 at 8:49 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

This poem almost made me cry when I read it. Way to go! I loved it!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 4:34 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I had to read the 1st part, so I read the 2nd it makes sense.. I hope you dont feel bad, I like your poems, which is what this is about, Such a great writer..

Check my poems.


on Jun. 7 2010 at 8:44 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwwwwwwwww.. and goood poem:]

the dog said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 2:33 pm
i love you baby

on Sep. 22 2009 at 12:52 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
15 articles 0 photos 119 comments
this is cute..
well hell be out of jail in no time hunn.
just keep writing and keep him in your prayers.




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