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Danny dances in the rain.
He finds no reason to complain.
Danny found a friend that falls
That cleanses him, soul and all.
Danny found a spectator,
That doesn’t judge his behavior
Or his dancing or his prancing
In the rain that falls, enchanting.

Danny dances in the rain,
with not a care within his brain.
Danny lets his cares all fall,
With the rain down, down, down.
Danny feels a rush of freedom,
Groove and move and jump inside ’im.
Shaping every leap and thought,
Dancing like he’ll ne’er be caught.

Danny dances in the rain
Oblivious to any pain.
The tiny rocks beneath his toes
Are never a distracting woe.
He feels the night, cold and bitter,
As the raindrops fall and pitter
Patter on his hat, frayed and tattered,
And on his shoes of weathered leather.

Danny left his work with mind
To know that now’s his time to find
A quick escape from his daily grind,
Making him the purer kind.
Danny knows the moon must hide,
Take the sky? The clouds obliged.
Masking Galileo’s pride
Behind their falling moistened hide.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Jadafunk said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 7:08 am
GREAT WORK!!!!!!
 
musicgirl1998 said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 7:21 pm
Wow! This is amazing! It made me feel very free and relaxed. Is there some symbolism in here with the rain and his no worries, or is that just me thinking? really good!
 
MoraleAsh said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 9:04 pm
Really beautiful subject but not exactly in limerick form. Close though.
 
EricForman said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:39 pm
I feel like this was a bit random, but it is a really good poem.
 
katiethefabulous said...
May 3, 2010 at 5:24 pm
So light and happy, like a caramel bubble of goodness! The last four lines are incredibly gorgeous. Made me feel better!
 
RadLeY said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:06 am
I like it, especially because my name is Dan!
 
Yoodle15 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 12:39 pm
This poem creates a light happy feeling like a bubble expanding inside me, I feel like dancing in the rain with Danny!! =)
 
Amber C. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 3:22 pm
i love your poem. its flows beautifully and the imagery is gorgeous.
 
OLIVIA!!!!! said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 11:26 pm
love this poem, check me out (i wrote one called fire candy)
 
Alyssa-Rose P. said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 7:05 pm
heyy love this poem (:
 
cmoney1996 said...
Jun. 21, 2009 at 6:03 pm
GREAT JOB check my poem out called Marriage.
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2009 at 10:49 pm
This is amazing. I like where your mind goes with this. It creates a beautiful image and a very good play with the words. I also like how you refrain in this piece. A very good dialect indeed. Great job!

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Lainee said...
Jun. 16, 2009 at 10:58 pm
How beautiful:
Wonder in excess,
Imagery beyond success.
Danny may dance,
But so do your words.
Your words, dancing about the brain,
Hitting the senses beyond mundain=>
 
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