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Our eyes are blinded by clouds of gray.
Everywhere we go everywhere we stray.
Trucks and cars wind down our streets.
The grayness meets.
We believe it will go away so we sit and wait.
People strive to show and demonstrate.
But it’s as if no one takes the bait.
Someone, Somewhere, Someday
I believe there will be a way.



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dragonfly95 said...
May 27, 2013 at 7:50 pm
hmm very interesting poem.
 
TiredEternity said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 3:21 pm
Great poetry, so prfound yet realistic. I greatly enjoyed it!
 
babigerl1194 said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 11:33 am
i like this its soo positive and ik for me happy poems. good job. plz check out my work too =) smile smile
 
xomolls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 6:46 pm
I agree with dreamer_believe, this is beautiful. I like how you use bait when talking about humans.
 
dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 3:09 pm
wow :) this is beatiful! the flow is amazing, and it has deep meaning. i really love this. omigoodness its great :) 5 stars, wish i could give you more than a 5! :) check out some of my work when you can and comment, i love feedback.
 
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