My Unnameable

June 1, 2009
By Chicken--Pie SILVER, Higher Bebington, Other
Chicken--Pie SILVER, Higher Bebington, Other
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Why did the moth fall for the star?
The answer to that one is easy by far.

But why did beauty fall for the beast?
She wouldn’t. The fairytale ending has ceased.

But what if she did fall, head over heels?
You can’t imagine how terrible it feels.

To be so afraid of what people think.
The Titanic is sail, crash and sink.

Survivors: One. Casualties: Many.
But which one is one? Which one, if any?

I feel like I’m drowning without any water.
Just pressure and pressure and, look, yet more pressure.

I can’t make things rhyme anymore – like I’d need to.
I can’t write things down like before ‘cause I miss you.


The author's comments:
I wrote this on Holiday in Greece. I got it right first time. I was over-heated an dehydrated, but I managed it.

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on Jun. 14 2013 at 12:13 am
Laila.123 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life's what you make it.

Very good and relatable. This is perfect for understanding someone's mood who is going through a break up. I love it!

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on Apr. 27 2013 at 8:48 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

ahh love it. check out some of my writing?

on Jun. 13 2012 at 9:12 am
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Really well written, good job! Ps. Please check out my work? =-D

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on Jan. 28 2011 at 4:40 pm
Hope Udarbe, Westminster, Colorado
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this poem almost made me cry it was that great

on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:32 am
LolCatzMcGee PLATINUM, London, Hawaii
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love it. all your poetry is really amazing and unique.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 1:26 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

Aw this is really good! The last two lines are so cute. :)

on Jun. 12 2009 at 6:46 pm
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM, Fort Collins, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never regret anything, at one point its exactly what you wanted."

wow...that is the only word that i can think of! its amazing!


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