I Never Thought I Would See the Day...

June 1, 2009
By Allie Sherwood BRONZE, Gfdsgfd, Michigan
Allie Sherwood BRONZE, Gfdsgfd, Michigan
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I never thought I would see the day,
where I would look and see you coming my way,
I am happy, and loose all fear,
and everything else starts to disapear.
Your arms are open, so kind and warm,
but as you walk to her my heart is torn.
My heart stops, with her hand in yours,
I walk away, can't see anymore.
As I turn, I start to cry,
and my love for you begins to die.
I never thought I would see the day,
where you would take my heart, and throw it away.


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on Mar. 24 2017 at 8:42 am
Team_SESH BRONZE, Somerdale, New Jersey
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it's lose not loose, there's a clear S sound at the end of the word, while lose has a more Z sound to it. Just saying ;)

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on Aug. 19 2013 at 8:50 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

very moving. the rhyme is great, and i love the story. great job

on Jan. 27 2011 at 5:51 pm
-143_ily. BRONZE, Over The Rainbow,Where The Skittles Are, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
~*You Know You're In Love When You Can't Fall Asleep Because Reality Is Finally Better Than Your Dreams!*~ <3

~If U Want Me 2 Fall For U..... U Gotta Give Me Sumthin' Worth Trippin' Ova! ~

so truee. i love it. im in the same situation at the moment . 5 stars .  ima add it as my favorite

on Sep. 5 2009 at 5:57 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

oh wow :) i really like this! it's so pure and i love the love you wrote about, how many people have experienced this? all around i love it!


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