I Never Thought I Would See the Day...

June 1, 2009
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I never thought I would see the day,
where I would look and see you coming my way,
I am happy, and loose all fear,
and everything else starts to disapear.
Your arms are open, so kind and warm,
but as you walk to her my heart is torn.
My heart stops, with her hand in yours,
I walk away, can't see anymore.
As I turn, I start to cry,
and my love for you begins to die.
I never thought I would see the day,
where you would take my heart, and throw it away.

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Team_SESHThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24 at 8:42 am
it's lose not loose, there's a clear S sound at the end of the word, while lose has a more Z sound to it. Just saying ;)
sarah98 said...
Aug. 19, 2013 at 8:50 am
very moving. the rhyme is great, and i love the story. great job
-kmb. said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 5:51 pm
so truee. i love it. im in the same situation at the moment . 5 stars .  ima add it as my favorite
dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 5:57 pm
oh wow :) i really like this! it's so pure and i love the love you wrote about, how many people have experienced this? all around i love it!
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