My Love

June 2, 2009
By Robert Gilleo BRONZE, Peekskill, New York
Robert Gilleo BRONZE, Peekskill, New York
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She melts my soul with every kiss, never thought I would find a love like this.
She blessed me with the key to her heart, I promise we will never be apart.
She’s lost in a love that ended before it started, never thought that she would be broken hearted.
He struck her down and left her there,
Yet
she cant see that he really doesn’t care.
Please believe that god sent me to set you free, as long as u have me you’ll never be lonely.
I love her with every ounce of my being, she’s the only lady that can make me sing.
You bring out the best in me…

and for that I owe u my life.
I give you my word baby girl as long as I live I’ll never bring you to where he did.
I swear on this page, I will love you til’ my dying day.



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rubyraeg said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 10:22 pm
rubyraeg, Columbus, New Jersey
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That's a really sweet poem! You can definitely become better at this, so persevere and continue doing what you love!

on Nov. 4 2015 at 3:04 pm
FinnLeonardJarrettHudson BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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This is honestly one of the best poems I've ever read! I know how it feels to love someone as much as it says in the poem. When you say "I love her with every ounce of my being, she's the only lady that can make me sing", that is exactly how I've felt about someone over these past years. The girl I like also helps to "bring out the best in me", and it just amazes me how much I can relate to this poem! This is absolutely a 10!

on Aug. 16 2014 at 7:30 am
Deylanda XO SILVER, Accra, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is worth spending time alone to dream about making the impossible possible.

that is so sweet. i've got tears in my eyes

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on May. 23 2013 at 2:55 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

awwwwwwwww!!! :"")

on Jun. 5 2010 at 2:26 pm
jesseay09 SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel.... Because those that matter... don't mind... And those that mind... don't matter.

That was very beautiful !!


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