Action Of Violence

February 6, 2018

There are always violence around,
And there's nothing that we can’t do,
To walk by and watch.






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@DarkPoet Good job! This haiku is realistic, and I think you should know that the first line has 9 and the second has 8. The syllable format is 5-7-5. The third line meets the requirements, but I think you can say, "Violence is known" and the second line may be "Yet we don't do anything" and the third line, "But sit and watch it."
 
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