Whispers MAG

November 4, 2016
By LostPoetry GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
LostPoetry GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Each day I have to make a new promise to myself
to be braver than my past
to be stronger than the struggle
So that I may find a bigger adventure regardless of the risks"
-Chrissie Pinney


Voices always said,
Try to think before you eat
Stomach’s now hollow



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on May. 14 at 1:24 pm
sierradockery29 BRONZE, St.louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
¨never fall too hard for someone cause you never know what they are capable of¨

I absolutely love this because it has such a deep meaning to it and it just speaks to me good job and keep writing

on Dec. 22 2016 at 3:48 am
LeisurelySketches SILVER, Mohali, Punjab, Other
8 articles 3 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your life has a limit but knowledge has none. (Zhuangzi)

Wow. I completely agree with the previous comments, your haikus are deep.

KRose SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2016 at 11:48 am
KRose SILVER, Portsmouth, Rhode Island
9 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Maybe the journey isn't so much about becoming anything. Maybe it's about unbecoming everything that isn't really you, so you can be who you were meant to be in the first place."

This is such a powerful haiku. Wow. It really portrays a message, nice job!

on Nov. 11 2016 at 3:08 am
dissolving_into_words BRONZE, Amsterdam, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I love this!

on Nov. 8 2016 at 9:28 pm
LostPoetry GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
10 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Each day I have to make a new promise to myself
to be braver than my past
to be stronger than the struggle
So that I may find a bigger adventure regardless of the risks"
-Chrissie Pinney

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it and got something from it.

whitemen said...
on Nov. 8 2016 at 9:03 pm
whitemen, Lafayette, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"okay"

It took me a little while to realize what you were saying, but once I understood the power behind that first line, I had a sort of BAM moment that made my heart contract. Dude, I didn't know haikus could be so powerful.


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