Sparkles for Me

Stare at the surface

Shines a sparkling reflection,

On the calm water.






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A-C-Y said...
Nov. 5, 2015 at 9:10 am
Not an expert on poetry, but I thought it was amazing what you could create just by three simple lines. Nice job!
 
thisEmilyda1 replied...
Nov. 5, 2015 at 1:49 pm
Thanks! Thanks for commenting too.
 
KittyKat1419 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2015 at 5:58 pm
I like it but maybe you should make it a bit longer? I want more words!
 
thisEmilyda1 replied...
Jul. 24, 2015 at 7:11 pm
Thank you for your comment. The reason it is so short is because it's supposed to be a haiku. Haikus have three lines, the first line has five syllables, the second has seven, and the third has five. :)
 
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