Sparkles for Me

July 11, 2015
By ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
-Albert Instien
the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.


Stare at the surface

Shines a sparkling reflection,

On the calm water.



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on Nov. 5 2015 at 1:49 pm
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
-Albert Instien
the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

Thanks! Thanks for commenting too.

A-C-Y BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2015 at 9:10 am
A-C-Y BRONZE, New Taipei City, Other
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Not an expert on poetry, but I thought it was amazing what you could create just by three simple lines. Nice job!

on Jul. 24 2015 at 7:11 pm
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
-Albert Instien
the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

Thank you for your comment. The reason it is so short is because it's supposed to be a haiku. Haikus have three lines, the first line has five syllables, the second has seven, and the third has five. :)

on Jul. 24 2015 at 5:58 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
22 articles 1 photo 260 comments
I like it but maybe you should make it a bit longer? I want more words!


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