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little haiku poem
bouncing around in my head
messes up my hair.

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gregeron91 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:02 pm:
What a true American Haiku...amazing. Thank you for sharing :]
 
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2britt13 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 11:46 am:
What a good way to say something in not a lot of words!
 
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CHEERLEADER~4~life said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:01 am:
this is very true! i really like your poem
;-)
 
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tomtamtimmy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 3:09 am:
ha awesome
0 o
U
 
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jeanwolf said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 12:36 am:
love is very nice.
and poem can be used as 1or2 so if you ust as one, this is a proper hiku.
 
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randomgirl721997 said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 6:49 pm:
umm well this was good but the first line has 6 instead of 5
 
IzzyPop replied...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 4:54 pm :
no, it doesn't.
 
DirtySweatpants This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 3:23 pm :
lit-uhl hi-ku po-um
 
IzzyPop replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 7:26 am :
alalalala who cares
 
sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:26 pm :
Poem is one syllable.
 
sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 4:28 pm :
Never mind [: the dictionary says it's two syllables.
 
IzzyPop replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 1:41 pm :
oh well!!!
 
BMMSKC replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:57 pm :
BLAH,BLAH,BLAH...WHO CARES!!!!
 
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CrazyPencilGirl said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 7:08 am:
um isnt it supposed to be 5, 7, 5 (in terms of syllables) not 6,7,5? But I still think that this is a really great poem.
 
Oliver K. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 1:24 pm :
poem can either be a two or one, several words are like that, i, for instance pronounce poem- poem, instead of po-em.
 
hawkfire replied...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 3:23 pm :
Realy?
i didnt know that
i thought it could only be po-em
 
shellbi123 replied...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 7:53 am :
I PRETTY SURE THAT IT WAS 5-7-5 . lol but no biggy
 
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Hannah R. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 9:22 pm:
luv it!! u put a nice twist on a typically deep and thoughtful kind of poetry
 
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nicole123 said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 6:26 pm:
this pome made me giggle the first time i read it i thought it was cute
 
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SaraB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2009 at 2:30 pm:
That is so cute and just plain awesome. Good use of personification!
 
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