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little haiku poem
bouncing around in my head
messes up my hair.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Athena19This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 5:15 pm:
Haha I like the imagery :)
 
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pulledheartstringThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23 at 2:11 am:
Cute and simple.
 
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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 22, 2012 at 7:37 pm:
Nice! :) 
 
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Riley79 said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 12:02 am:
That's so cute!
 
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Nemmers said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 9:49 am:
This poem reaches out to me oh so much...Its fabulous! I really like it because I can relate
 
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eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 12:26 pm:
Hilarious! The last line really turns around the whole meaning of it. Amazing!
 
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TheWhiteFlowerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 2:47 pm:

this is so cute!!!

I LUV IT

 
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speedygirl13 said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 11:43 am:
I think thats cool!
 
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TheFutureAwaitsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 12:41 pm:

LOL A modern Haiku!

Simple and gets to the point. :)

Great job!

 
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Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 10:53 am:
This is so quirky and simple, I love it! It's very entertaining to read.
 
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snaomi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 4:28 pm:
this is totally adorable.  nice work - surprising ending
 
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Sophie Rose C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 2:15 am:
really sweet and straight forward - it made me smile with its charm!
 
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foreverme said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 9:20 am:
I love it. It made me laugh.
 
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beach said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 3:52 pm:
this is a cute twist, maybe something deeper next time... but i do like it
 
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shellbi123 said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 7:50 am:
i love this!!!! haikus are one of my favorite things of poetry, KEEP WRITING:)
 
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Lanier42 said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 4:13 pm:
i love this. its funny, but not stupid. great job
 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 3:23 pm:
Very witty! Nice job - check out my stuff?
 
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horsie_luver said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 11:11 pm:
I like your poem, but it's not a true haiku. A true haiku has 3 lines; the 1st and 3rd line have 5 syllables and the 2nd has 7 syllables. Your 1st line has 6 syllables. But I still really like your poem.
 
horsie_luver replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 11:13 pm :
Oh wait. If you pronounce poem as 1 syllable then it is 5-7-5. Never mind! (I pronounce it as 2 syllables)
 
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gregeron91 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:02 pm:
What a true American Haiku...amazing. Thank you for sharing :]
 
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