Open Heart

Love is like a gift                                                                         It wounds people now and then                                                     With an open heart






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ansem_unlimited said...
Jan. 5, 2015 at 9:23 am
a beautiful haiku but my insight into this type of poetry lies elsewhere, so I'm sorry to say I'm not experienced enough to give you any solid advice but it was enjoyable to read!
 
Thefanatasticagirlie101 replied...
Jan. 5, 2015 at 2:02 pm
Thank you, I'm pretty new here so I need feedback like this. Thanks a lot.
 
ansem_unlimited replied...
Jan. 15, 2015 at 11:59 am
you're a talented writer... alot of the people on this site are.but all you need is your own approval, without that, you could have a million people cheering you on & never meet your goals. but regardless I give you my support
 
Thefanatasticagirlie101 replied...
Jan. 15, 2015 at 6:13 pm
Thanks again for your insightful feedback @ansem_unlimited
 
ansem_unlimited replied...
Jan. 15, 2015 at 9:19 pm
any time :)
 
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