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A Promise Broken is a Heart Broken

December 30, 2014
By Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.


In isolation,

I cried, "love is a promise,

but why'd you break yours?"


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on Jan. 9 2015 at 8:25 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

Thank you and your work is magnificent as well.

on Jan. 5 2015 at 6:21 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

You did a great job filling those three lines. I could feel the emotion behind it. What I love is how all ages can relate to this- whether it's a child or a grown adult. This is something everyone can sympathize with and this is just amazing. You're a wonderful poet.

on Jan. 5 2015 at 5:59 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

It was hard making a love story within three lines so I just want to state that it was hard to encompass the emotion.


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