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Deception

December 26, 2014
By Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.


A kind child who speaks

Says words of pure innocence

Until she first lies


The author's comments:

Hoping this piece will complement my poem anthology: A Look Inside Pandora's Box. I feel so complacent with this one considering I wrote this in like 2 minute from pure emotion.


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on Jan. 5 2015 at 5:54 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

Just want to thank everyone who commented and/or rated this poem -R.C.

on Dec. 29 2014 at 3:38 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

Thank you. Sadly, I do believe that when a child first lies to you, a part of them just dies in your eyes.

on Dec. 29 2014 at 2:22 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

This is amazing. An entire childhood of innocence is unraveled brilliantly within a mere three lines. Having a little sister, one of my greatest fears is her one day lying to me. This is absolutely splendid.


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