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Moment of Relaxation

December 25, 2014
By MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci


Swirling honey dew,

long, elegant silver stirring

delicious potion. 



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on Mar. 11 2015 at 8:42 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

As do I. This is definitely one of my favourite works, and it makes me drown in the delicious wording. Wow that sounded self-centered. Anyways, thank you for the lovely feedback as usual.

on Jan. 8 2015 at 9:48 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

Thanks and I would, but I can't find any of your works.

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2015 at 7:58 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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Pretty imagery! It made me feel as if I was on a beach chair at the beach eating honey dew! Check out my poem and give me feedback please!

on Jan. 1 2015 at 6:30 pm
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
74 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

Sweet, simply, lovely, relaxing, elegant, elemental, etc. All of these words and so many more describe the feeling you get when you read this exciting little poem of relaxation. Oh, for I wish this moment could last forever!

on Dec. 29 2014 at 4:29 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

Thank you!

on Dec. 29 2014 at 3:43 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

That great use of imagery really does create a moment of relaxation.


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