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Angelic Meteor

December 1, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks


She fell from the stars

A gift from Heaven's own store

She burned so brightly



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on Dec. 4 2014 at 6:14 pm
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself."
"A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid..."

Being obsessed with haikus is not a bad thing at all haha!! xD

on Dec. 4 2014 at 5:19 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thanks so much Nigtingale! I am so glad you liked this haiku :) I am a bit obsessed with them if you've seen my profile lately lol. Thanks for stopping by, I appreciate it :)

on Dec. 4 2014 at 2:56 pm
Nightingale74 PLATINUM, Beavercreek, Ohio
46 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you need something to believe in, believe in yourself."
"A poem unwritten is only a thought; unshared, unsaid..."

You've done it once again, Liv! This poem was so short and simple (as all haikus are) but it was also really open-ended; there are many different angles from which the reader can look at this poem, so many different ways people can relate to it :) I really love your title for this poem, Angelic Metoer, it's almost a paradox! I've never thought about comparing an angel falling out of the sky to a meteor falling out of the sky, it's unique!! Keep up the great work, Liv! :) I'll be anxiously awaiting your next masterpiece ;)

on Dec. 3 2014 at 10:36 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Your comments always make me smile :) I love how expressive and kind you are, it proves to me that there are wonderful people left in this world :)

on Dec. 3 2014 at 10:23 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Oh, I just love your haikus. I always find them lovely and filled with such beauty. :)   Your words are few yet so powerful, just filled with power and beauty and so much light that is your own.    I keep saying this, but I keep meaning it: I am so glad and honored and thankful that I know you. For you are a wonderful and amazing and beautiful writer and person, filled with beauty and talent and light and greatness; and so much more. Just so, so much more. Thank you. :)   Thank you so much, for being a friend and for being you for you are amazing. Thank you for sharing your poem and one of your talents, my friend. Thank you. :)


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