Sunday Morning MAG

December 29, 2008
By sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut


Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.



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weasel123 said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 10:31 am
weasel123, Carrollton, Texas
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I like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.

on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:29 pm
tooswaggedout, Dallas, Texas
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I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone. 

 


Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:51 am
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
14 articles 1 photo 121 comments
I really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!

TaleGate GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:56 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

Sweet thanks. I hope I didn't come off as too snobbish O.o

on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:41 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments
TaleGate^ completely agree

on Aug. 15 2011 at 8:40 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
11 articles 2 photos 276 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

That's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)

on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:51 pm
xxEbonyxx SILVER, McKinney, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take me as I am

If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!

A_____ said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 5:18 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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Whoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!

A_____ said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 5:18 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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This makes me feel warm and happy and satisfied.  It shares a striking resemblance with good coffee. (:

on Aug. 15 2011 at 4:24 pm
Norma-Bernard GOLD, Moosic, Pennsylvania
14 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When a door closes, somewhere out there a window opens."

I have tried haiku a million times and it's never been this good. Did you write this before your coffee or after???? lol jk. Either way, I love it. Check out my work please and see what you think. :)

Janeyy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 1:49 pm
Janeyy BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
4 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams\" <3

Aww, I LOVE this! Its so cute, cozy and sweet :) I Love how it captures everything in just a couple of lines. I really love this so much. So refreshing!

TaleGate GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 1:25 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

As an author, I feel like it's good as it is. Doesn't need to be longer. I personally love coffee on a Sunday morning. It's refreshing. If it went on too much longer, it'd just drag on. It's meant to be short I think.

nai.n.n. said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 11:38 pm
love it... but it's really short. it's cute and sweet, but it has to be more powerful if it's only going to be that short...

on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:52 am
HollyBell BRONZE, Orpington, Kent, Other
3 articles 0 photos 23 comments

A short straight to the point poem like a breathe of fresh air. Great job.

Check out mine? - I'm desperate for comments :3  TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/350551/Kings-Cross/


on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:40 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

WOW!! great poem! so simple and nice! Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D

Issie BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:26 am
Issie BRONZE, Chestnut Ridge, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
ce'est la vie!!!!

short and sweet! it's amazing how so few words can say so much- something so significant. especially for people who like coffee! and sorry to advertise here, but i just submitted my first stuff-please give me feed-back

on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:13 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!

S M Wells said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:12 pm
I would say, if, the author relplys to our comments.

on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:11 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

well, you never really know...I mean, the usernames says something, also some people like to post work they'd written years ago...

we'll find out when the author replies to our comments!


on Jul. 2 2011 at 8:29 pm
MaxTapogna BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
All right then, I'll go to hell
-Mark Twain

Dido...................


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