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Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.

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ChowD This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 2:06 pm
haha, good job on getting rated # one on one sentence!!
it is cute :]
 
ciaobella57 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 12:38 pm
So simple, I love it.
 
GirlWithWings56 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 7:45 pm
That's cute :]
 
.jess.h. said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:47 pm
I don't understand the meaning of this poem. Is it like the person gives you energy...or what?
 
maragrace replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 4:07 pm
Or maybe it could mean that this person is warm and refreshing, something to savour and enjoy? Maybe. :)
 
nancy! said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 6:09 pm
simple, but very creative :]
 
poet unknown said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 3:55 pm
that was short and sweet and i get it. ingenius.
 
siaradodds said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 2:31 pm
i don't get it......
 
L.G. smiles said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 7:33 pm
Really great metaphor! It sounds very original, which is a good thing.
 
monkeyfeet2 said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 3:06 pm
Perfect Idea. I really like it!
 
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 10:02 am
Nice:) Very original
 
Infortuneshand !. said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 6:15 pm
I loved that! That was amazing, it sounds like it could have been written by a famous Japanese poet...
 
krysling said...
Aug. 21, 2009 at 10:45 pm
simple and well written. i like the down to earth simile, its not all done up like most haikus. excellent job.
 
MoyruhJO This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 1:53 am
That was fantastic. I truly envy people who can write haiku. :] Sorry for that fail. I really enjoyed that. A well structured haiku without that cute-sy feel most haiku have.
 
awesomeaugust said...
May 16, 2009 at 8:39 pm
really brilliant
only a few short words but so full of feeling and emotion
 
Mizz.Independent said...
May 16, 2009 at 6:48 pm
its short but sweet
 
Tasogare This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2009 at 1:39 pm
This is beautifully-written haiku. You waste not your 17 syllables. :)
 
Evynn A. said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 7:01 pm
that cute
 
Kumang said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 8:58 am
its so short.. but good
 
scotchtapedreams This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 4:32 am
Haiku - good ones - are my favorite style of poetry. This one is fabulous; I think one of the bests I have ever read. Kudos. Stunning and outstanding the way you have crammed such imagery and feelings of innocence in such a tiny space.
 
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