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Sweet Sugar Snowflakes

July 29, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks


Sweet sugar snowflakes
Rush down to greet my cold tongue
I savour the snow


The author's comments:
I have been attempting Haiku lately...tell me what you think! ^_^

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on Sep. 25 2014 at 8:56 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thanks so much! I'm glad you found it life-like ^_^

on Sep. 24 2014 at 3:10 pm
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE, New Castle, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write only because
there is a voice within me
that will not be still."
~ SYLVIA PLATH

(MY FORMER ACCOUNTS: Icantwrite & Punk.Snowflake)
Published poems from my former accounts:
- FRAIL HOPE (Icantwrite)
- YOURSELF (Punk.Snowflake)

I really like this. The imagery is vivid, perfect for a small poem like this. You captured a very real snapshot of a small and beautiful moment with words...Very well done!

on Sep. 13 2014 at 1:29 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

KaavyaM GOLD said...
on Sep. 12 2014 at 9:28 am
KaavyaM GOLD, Hyderabad, Other
10 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.

This is some great imagery, and a lovely haiku. Keep writing them. :)


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