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Shadows

May 19, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


Learn to be alone;
Even shadows may leave you,
When it's dark around.



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j2250 DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 9 2016 at 1:01 pm
j2250 DIAMOND, North Andover, Massachusetts
74 articles 9 photos 37 comments
Beautiful Haiku!!

on Feb. 21 2015 at 6:57 pm
Jayquellen BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all who wander are lost"

Wonderful haiku! It's really an art to be able to convey such a clear idea in so few syllables. The metaphor is really interesting too!

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 12:55 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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Wow! Thought provoking! I enjoyed reading it! post comments and check out my work!

on Nov. 5 2014 at 8:06 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

This haiku is one of the most perfect I've read on TI- just how haikus are supposed to be. This should have been published, and I'm oh so happily adding it as one of my favourites. Congratulations on your talent!

Jaanu said...
on Jul. 19 2014 at 12:14 pm
yes its true as far as one has no light in himself. 

Jaaanu said...
on Jul. 19 2014 at 12:10 pm
An apt poem rather a simple advice to those who dont know to be alone!

on Jul. 12 2014 at 2:07 am
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
9 articles 14 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality
-Tim Burton

and then there's this one
╭∩╮(︶︿︶)╭∩╮

I need to leave a comment because this poem is so amazing... but I have nothing to really comment about. Lovely, dark, and haunting, all in just 17 syllables.

on Jul. 3 2014 at 11:02 am
Gabrielleamar GOLD, New York, New York
11 articles 16 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Le vent se lève il faut tanter de vivre" –Paul Valèry

wow! brilliant!

on Jun. 5 2014 at 3:47 pm
MoreThanUseless, West Melbourne, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Awesome haiku! It seems so mysterious.

on Jun. 5 2014 at 10:03 am
Likhitha BRONZE, Bangalore, Other
1 article 4 photos 3 comments
Nice one :)

on Jun. 5 2014 at 9:46 am
Wontgiveup17 PLATINUM, Normal, Illinois
23 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life beats down and crushes the soul but art reminds you that you have one. -Stella Adler
He who lives upon hope will die fasting.
-Benjamin Franklin
If you're absent during my struggle. Don't expect to be present during my success.

I absolutely love it!!! I love the simplicity of it but how powerful it is still in the short amount of words, very well written!!!! Keep on writing!!! 5/5

FrancisAllen said...
on Jun. 3 2014 at 5:03 am
FrancisAllen, Bremerton, Washington
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Deep

Bleu... BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2014 at 9:43 pm
Bleu... BRONZE, Austin, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
F.I.S.H

this is really great

on Jun. 2 2014 at 2:50 pm
pinkplants PLATINUM, Brandon, Mississippi
39 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Whatever you are physically...male or female, strong or weak, ill or healthy--all those things matter less than what your heart contains. If you have the soul of a warrior, you are a warrior. All those other things, they are the glass that contains the lamp, but you are the light inside.”
― Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel

I like this a lot. Good job. :) 

on Jun. 2 2014 at 12:21 pm
HailSatan BRONZE, Crystal Lake, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Smoke Weed erryday" - Snoop Lion

hail satan

on Jun. 2 2014 at 10:19 am
nikkifuentes BRONZE, Wimauma, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.” _




Albert Einstein

short but nice like they say keep it short and sweet

on Jun. 1 2014 at 9:50 am
Sunshine2420 SILVER, Unknown, Other
9 articles 0 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A smile hides everything.

This haiku is one of the best one on teen ink, I think...really gooood ;)

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on May. 22 2014 at 4:12 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 527 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Spooky and mysterious, well done!

on May. 22 2014 at 1:01 pm
Regoneth SILVER, Ilford, Other
9 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Driver picks the music. Shotgun shuts his cake hole.” - Dean Winchester, Supernatural.

This is really good and mysterious. It's very ambiguous. Well done! :)

on May. 22 2014 at 11:02 am
this poem was good although i wish that they elaborated more than they did.