March 23, 2014
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The encroaching sails

Take me along with the wind
Let’s go together

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jacey_poo_girl said...
Apr. 19, 2014 at 12:59 am
Your haiku speaks very well, nd it's really beautiful how u put this together, your a very talented person, never stop writing
JacobTheOrdinary said...
Apr. 11, 2014 at 11:25 am
This is a nice haiku. Haiku's originated with talking about nature and you continue that tradition here. Weel written and good job.
WinterRose1976 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2014 at 8:05 pm
Your haiku has this dream-inducing quality to it which I thought was awesome! Nice job!
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