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Drop Drops (water)

March 12, 2014
By hrish GOLD, Varnansi, Other
hrish GOLD, Varnansi, Other
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Unseen water drop
Descends from tap on the top
None to make it stop



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hrish GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 5:41 am
hrish GOLD, Varnansi, Other
16 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Thanks for the comment i wished i had entered this poem in your contest but i was too late

on Mar. 17 2014 at 10:22 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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It is hard to implement rhythm in haiku, which you did masterfully. I commend you in that regard as well!

on Mar. 17 2014 at 10:20 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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I love this revised version! Great sensory detail :-)